Wednesday, February 19, 2014

The Gene for Music

Anna Boyer
Cooper
CRWR212
February 20, 2014
The Gene for Music
            The Tennessee sun beats down on the hot, sticky festival crowd. The air is hazy and dust makes swirls in the wake of footsteps. It is a humid June morning and many go without shirts. However, the music is keeping them there. The summer is made for music lovers. Tonight, a former Beatle takes the stage. Sir Paul McCartney, a true living legend. It is ten and a half hours until the show starts but the energy and anticipation felt by thousands who have lived and breathed the music is palpable. We scale the metal fence to join the line for the front pit, the stretch of land right in front of the stage. That is ultimate real estate. Other bands take the stage as the line to get into the front pit steadily grows throughout the day. People lounge in the field beyond the stage, sleeping and working on their sunburns. For now, the crowd is tame.
            As the afternoon progresses, the crowd becomes restless. They are excitable and full of adrenaline. The hot sun is setting in the sky and the air becomes cooler and refreshing. The last band clears the stage and everyone knows what time it is, even those without watches. Those who have waited all afternoon to get into the enviable front pit stand and stretch their limbs, preparing themselves for the marathon that is to come. As the gates are opened, the crowd surges forward. People run and push and shove, vying for the best possible position. From the fifth row back, the view is perfect: it is not so close as to hurt the neck but close enough to allow for the absorption of details and of memories.

The hour draws near and all of humanity seems to be vibrating. The crowd starts chanting and screaming at the tops of their lungs. As if summoned by the noise, their idol McCartney appears and the voices soar to a deafening roar. All of the eyes are starry and wide as if in disbelief that this man is not an imposter. The crowd never becomes tired; the final song and singing along to the immortal words has put them into a frenzy as stars fill the rural sky. The moment is over far too quickly. Still, though, the gene for music runs through their veins, tying strangers together and making them one, if only for a moment.

10 comments:

coopjs said...

Hi Anna,

First off, excellent use of description. The details are rich and florid. Also, wonderful use of alliteration with m's in the first paragraph and otherwise throughout.

While this is not a prose poem, but more straight prose, I do enjoy you ability to lead us through a narrative, to paint the scene, and explore plot. You may want to consider down the road looking into short stories. You seem to be quite naturally driven to that medium.

I wanted a bit more of a personal account of this experience. I can only assume you were there, but the story never indicates the narrator was present. I think especially because seeing Paul McCartney is a once in a lifetime opportunity you should impose of a bit of the confessional, the personal glory in having had that pleasure.

What songs were sung?
What else happened?
What happened afterward?

You describe the hours leading up to it, but what about coming down from such an extraordinary musical euphoria?

Excellent Work!

Prof. Cooper

Unknown said...

Hey Anna,

You always have such vivid descriptions in your work. I like how you took us through the day and built up anticipation for the climax of the main event of McCartney taking the stage. The crowd starts out tame in the afternoon but builds to a screaming frenzy as the big moment draws near. I liked your last line - music does give strangers a means to identify with each other. I enjoyed this piece.
Denise Bateman

annaboyer said...

Thanks for the comments! I still remember that concert very vividly. After "Hey Jude", the last song, I still couldn't believe what I had just seen.

Kaitlin Dixon said...

I really enjoyed your piece. It was extremely descriptive and I enjoyed how you shared the experience through imagery. I could almost imagine being in the audience as I read your piece. I would suggest adding more personal details. Where you with anyone, who? Did you meet new people that influenced your life?

Unknown said...

I love the work it reminds me of carpe diem, "seize the day". It is very lyrical and descriptive. Conceptually the prose paints the image of summer, for which I can’t wait for.

Thanks for sharing,

Jason Faulkner

Anonymous said...

Hi Anna!

I always enjoy reading your work. You have a way with words. I don't know if I can describe it really. It's like you force your readers to be a part of your pieces (at least it's like that for me anyway).

I truly felt like I was part of your concert experience while I was reading this poem. Your language was so descriptive that I could see the hot summer day and feel the crowd vibrating with anticipation. It's like I was there. the images were sharp and really helped to hit this piece home. Your use of alliteration was also wonderful. I also appreciated how you used the metaphor of a music gene to convey the feeling that people sometimes get from listening to really life changing music. It's like it very much becomes a part of you, so that was a nice touch.

This is an excellent piece of writing and I can't wait to read more of your work in the coming weeks!

~Crystal

Unknown said...

Hi Anna,

I really enjoyed your piece! I love the imagery that you incorporate into your work that describes everything very clearly and nicely. Nice work and this sounds like a great experience!

Deyanira Bustos

Claire Smithers said...

Anna,

First of all I am so jealous! That must have been an amazing experience and I can see why you chose to write about such an amazing and vivid memory. I really appreciate how personal this is, your description puts me right in your shoes. I can sense how passionate you are about this and it makes it easy to connect to this story. Very, very well done and I appreciate this and your taste in music. Absolutely wonderful imagery, a lot of senses were used in this. Also, your variation in sentence structure added to the flow of this. Very well done!

Thank you for this!
Claire Smithers

Unknown said...

This poem is very descriptive and the imagery is really strong. I had no trouble understanding what type of an environment you were standing in.

--Monique Ahmad

Unknown said...

Anna,

First off, omg! You were at Roo last year?! I was too! I get really excited when I learn that people I know, or even kind of know, were there! Your imagery was spot on. It put me back in that moment. I felt like I was standing right there so close to the stage with you instead of halfway back in the crowd. The way your final line captured what we were all feeling during that final song was beautiful. I’ve always struggled finding the words to describe that brief but lasting bond as Bonnaroovians. Ok, I’m getting nostalgic. I feel like I could better analyze what you wrote if I wasn’t actually there. I can’t past my experiences to further read into yours. I love this. Thank you for taking me back to that incredible moment. Also, are you going back this year?

Rebecca